Machines are taking over more and more jobs previously done by humans. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages and give your own opinion.
Certain groups today have argued that most of the current human
jobs
are taken over by machines
. The main benefits of this
are developing processes of jobs
and reducing workload, however
, the key drawbacks are disruptive human jobs
and high cost.
To begin
with, nowadays machines
are popular in many companies
because they use machines
for improving some processes for manufacturing products, for example
, a recent study found that most companies
in Thailand import machines
for manufacturing because of reducing employee’s income and most CEOs believe that machine can provide standard and efficiency for the product. In addition
, machines
can decrease a lot of work in workplaces as they can do some work that is
easy but waste time, such
as scanning paper and saving documents. That is
why many companies
are more likely to purchase machines
to help humans. For instance
, most companies
found that after using machine scanning, most employees tend to be spectacular at work because they can save time and concentrate on essential tasks.
On the other hand
, machines
have drawbacks, not only disruptive human jobs
but also
high costs. Some companies
have not hired humans because of
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apply
machines
for manufacturing. In some cases, in Thailand where
Rephrase
apply
oversea
industries use Fix the agreement mistake
overseas
machines
for manufacturing products and this
case may impact the rate of hiring jobs
that declines
gradually. Correct subject-verb agreement
decline
Additionally
, the machine is very high in cost and that is
why many companies
need to be kept for buying machines
.
In conclusion, the debate about machines
taking over human jobs
has both positive and negative. The positive is machines
can improve the process of jobs
and reduce workload. However
, the drawbacks are replacing human jobs
and high costs.Submitted by pear_chanok on
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