The charts show the number of people using the Internet from 1995 to 2002 and Internet users in the world in 2003.
The two graphs compare the number of online
users
of the internet
from around the world between 1995 and 2002, and internet
users
in 2003.
It is clear that
in Chart 1 the number of online people
rose steadily throughout the period. While
,
in Chart 2 the proportion of Remove the comma
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internet
users
from the USA and Canada constituted the highest figure.
In 1995, just over 20 million
people
used the Internet
. The figure had significant
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in
of
1999, from 195 Change preposition
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million
to 451 million
people
online worldwide. At the end
of the period, the trend accounted for 580 million
users
.
Meanwhile, in 2003 the internet
users
from the USA and Canada were just over 50%, compared to 1% of people
using the internet
from the Middle East and Africa. In addition
, the proportion of European users
of the internet
accounted for 24% in a given year. Whereas
, the percentage of people
from around the world who use the Internet
constituted 15% and 6% in Asia and South America respectively in the year 2003.Submitted by nuraiorynbassar07 on
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