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The pictures below show how tea is produced. They also illustrate the process of making a cup of tea. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features.

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The given pictures depict the production of
tea
 and the method of preparing a
cup
 of
tea
.
Overall
, it can be seen that
above-mentioned
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the above-mentioned
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 processes contain 18 stages and all of them will be described in
the
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further
 paragraphs.
According to
 the chart, it is clearly drawn that India and China are the major contributors to the production of
tea
.
Subsequently
,
tea
 seeds are sown in these countries and
grows
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 as it receives the optimum sunshine.
Then
tea
 leaves from the plants are collected in baskets by humans and dried under the sun. These dried leaves are
then
 packed into boxes, transported and delivered to supermarkets, from where customers buy
it
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them
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.
Following
this
,
customer
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a customer
the customer
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 brings it to the home and
pour
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pours
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a
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water into
kettle
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the kettle
a kettle
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 in order to boil it. After that, boiled water
transferred
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was transferred
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 to a
cup
 with a
tea
 bag inside. The
cup
 of
tea
 is ready in two minutes, and
for
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apply
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those who prefer milk or sugar, can add it and can enjoy drinking the
cup
 of
tea
.
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