Governments should spend money on railways rather than roads. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Spending funds on transportation pathways is a topic of discussion. I strongly disagree that the government should put

money

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for

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railways

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instead

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of

roads

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. The first reason is

about

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people who always prefer to go anywhere by their own vehicle because they work hard to collect their salaries with the aim of purchasing a

car

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to live more

easy

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, a person who has a good quality

car

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, like to go on a trip

by

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their own

car

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to be more comfortable and do whatever they want.

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, the officials should collect the

money

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and spend it

for

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ways to make good

roads

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due to

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their

citizens

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commute

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better. The second one would be about the ticket prices

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expenses

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that train and

railways

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have, the tickets are usually expensive. In

this

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case, people tend to go anywhere

by

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their own

car

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.

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, individuals prefer to go on a trip by

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as the tickets

are cost

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a leg and

arm

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.

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,

trip

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is always expensive because the members should spend a lot of

money

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on accommodation, food, souvenir and so on, so they prefer to cut back on other transport and stick to road transport like their own

car

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and bus. So, the ticket prices are not reasonable and it is better to put that

money

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on

road

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and

construction

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of good trails. Some may argue that

,

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the authorities need to spend

money

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on

railways

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because it is a safe way to protect

inhabitant

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;

however

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,

whit

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good quality

roads

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and good drivers, everyone will be safe. In conclusion, I strongly disagree that the government should spend

money

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on

railways

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because of two reasons, one is about preferences of the society to go anywhere by their

car

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and the second is about the expensive tickets that the trains

has

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whereas

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some people think that it is a safe way but we can monitor it by good

roads

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and drivers.