Buying things on the Internet, such as books, air tickets and groceries, is becoming more and more popular. Do the advantages of shopping in this way outweigh the disadvantages?

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Online shopping is becoming confident for
people
to buy
such
as clothes, groceries, books,
gadgets
and air
tickets
rather than going to buy offline.
Although
,there are some precarious disadvantages to buying online. On the one hand,there is a myriad of
people
who are satisfied with their online shopping,but many of them are faced with
Internet
frauds are getting money from customers’ credit cards and disappearing. Because of
such
hackers, the trust of customers in online shopping is becoming decrease and they are preferred to offline after hackers steal.
moreover
,buying from markets is too beneficial,because you can touch the quality of the materials and try it on you how it suits you or you can clumsily.
For instance
,my friend is deceived when she wanted to order clothes,but,unfortunately, the vendor was an
Internet
fraud.And she had copied her credit card details and stolen a big amount of money,and my friend was not trying to buy something from the
Internet
.
Thus
,
this
means you will be able to know and be familiar with
this
vendor before buying something until before buying it.
On the other hand
,online shopping is very confident for
people
who are busy at work for a full day. Web shopping provides features to buy,exchange and return products just by a click of a button, avoiding the huddle of going to malls and stores. And
also
,you can buy groceries,
gadgets
and clothes of good quality.
Moreover
,buying
gadgets
from the
Internet
is the best way,because at stores you will be deceived with fake and non-original
gadgets
.By the way,you can find any kind of book on the
Internet
which you can not find in your city.
As well as
,you can easily purchase seats or buy
tickets
to planes, trains, cinemas, theatres or concerts rather than going to the ticket office,because you will be late and buy a seat
at the end
of the hall or all
tickets
may be sold out.
For example
, I always with my friends ordered
tickets
online to the first rows of the hall and enjoy it more than others who are sitting
at the end
.
To conclude
,online purchasing is growing inadvertently.My opinion is that online shopping is more convenient and relaxing
whereas
in-store shopping is more for
people
who look for entertainment.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • convenience
  • time-saving
  • wide selection
  • competitive prices
  • discounts
  • accessibility
  • global marketplace
  • availability
  • fraud
  • scams
  • lack of
  • physical interaction
  • personal experience
  • impersonal
  • customer service
  • delays
  • delivery
  • return process
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