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In the future , nobody will buy printed newspaper or books because they will be able to read everything they want online without paying. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

#future #nobody #newspaper #books
In
modern
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 world, social
media
 provides all kinds of
information
 to
individuals
. Some assume that there is no need for newspapers and different
books
 to provide
details
 to
people
,
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because
it
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they
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 can be easily available on social
media
 platforms .
However
, I partly agree with
this
 statement and the reasons will be shown
on
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 the following paragraphs. On the one hand, the internet can be vital help for
individuals '
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individuals
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because every
information
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piece of information
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 can be simply accessible from different
softwares
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software
. To elaborate, nowadays virtual world contains so many applications for assisting societies to gather
information
 on various topics like science, business or education .
Hence
 , they can acquire
details
 without losing any money or time ,
whereas
 for newspapers and other ,articles
individuals
 need to pay and sometimes even need to travel to places like libraries to access
information
 .
For example
, there are so many websites
such
 as Wikipedia that hold a lot of data about different events that can be useful for
individuals
 like for business purposes or studies so that they can use it for their personal growth.
In addition
 , every news
that is
 available on the internet is updated compared to published
books
 and magazines .It is obvious that a book only contains
details
 about a particular time period , and it cannot be upgraded by factual
details
 .
Therefore
 ,by reading these
books
people
 can be easily misinterpreted old
information
 , and
as a result
, it can lead to
further
 problems among
people
.
On the other hand
, all
details
 that are obtained from
the
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social
media
 cannot be real facts
,
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 and can be rewritten by an individual. To exemplify , the virtual world contains so many loopholes that can be invaded by any person easily . Thereby , editing
a
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information
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information
 can be an easy task for them because social
media
 carry so many applications that can provide help for spammers .
As a result
., It can mislead
people
to
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a
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negative thinking .
For instance
 , in India there had been so much fake news about diseases during the COVID pandemic that Caused conflicts and panic among
people
 n.
Thus
 causing a lot of problems
to
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 higher authorities.
To conclude
, social
media
 can be easily platform to acquire knowledge than newsy or
books
 . I think that sometimes it is better to seek
information
 from articles and
newspaper
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 because it provides factual figures about the
information
.
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