The graph below shows the number of tourists visiting a particular Caribbean island between 2010 and 2017

The graph below shows the number of tourists visiting a particular Caribbean island between 2010 and 2017
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The given line graph illustrates the
number
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of
visitors
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, who came was a tourist, of a single Caribbean
Island
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. The duration of the information is seven years and starts in 2010.
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, it is clear from the diagram that
number
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of total
visitors
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had not downward change and all lines had a downward trend. Turning to the details, most
the
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tourists
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prefer to stay on
Island
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in 2010 and
this
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number
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of
tourists
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was stable until 2011. The
number
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of people choosing tourist ships rose steadily during the same time,
however
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, it was followed by a steady drop in 2012. 2012 witnessed a dramatic growth in the total
number
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of
visitors
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to the particular Caribbean
Island
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. The
number
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of
tourists
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who stayed on the
Island
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rose sharply and
then
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gradually in 2012 and 2013 respectively,
whereas
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the quantity of cruise ship stayers fluctuated. In 2014 the
amount
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of
visitors
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staying on ships increased briefly ,
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it was followed by a gradual rise until 2016 ,
on the contrary
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, the
number
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of
Island
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staying
tourists
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decreased gradually. The
number
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of whole
tourists
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was not increased only in 2016 when it was stable. 2017 saw a sharp improvement in the numbers of total and touristic ship-staying
visitors
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,
while
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Island
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stayers' numbers rose steadily.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words number, visitors, island, tourists with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "number of" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 9 times.
Vocabulary: The word "downward" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "stay" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "stable" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "gradually" was used 3 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • fluctuation
  • peak
  • trough
  • upward trend
  • downward trend
  • steady increase
  • sharp decline
  • seasonal variation
  • cruise ship visitors
  • island stay visitors
  • economic impact
  • environmental impact
  • tourism industry
  • sustainable tourism
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