The graph below shows the number of shops that closed and the number of new shops that opened in one country between 2011 and 2018. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows the number of shops that closed and the number of new shops that opened in one country between 2011 and 2018. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The line graph provides a comparison of 2 situations of markets in terms of
closures
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and
openings
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over a period of approximately 8 years.
Overall
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, the main feature of the data is that both
openings
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and
closures
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stores
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of stores
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showed a significant
drop
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over the period.
However
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,
closures
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took the primary form
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at
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in
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the end.
According to
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the graph, it is evident that in 2011, the shops which opened provided
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far twice more than
closures
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amounting to just below 9000 stores before the dramatic
drop
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in 2012.
In contrast
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, closing shops started to overtake
openings
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in 2012 and reached a peak amounting to around 7000. In 2014 both types of stores had roughly the same proportion comprising just over 6000 markets. It is noticeable that in 2014
closures
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saw a sharp plummet and hit a low as it amounted to a negligible number, a
drop
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of almost 6000.
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, in the same year
openings
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showed a slight decrease and remained stable until 2017 when they saw again a rapid
drop
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.
Closures
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shops soared dramatically in 2015 and comprised 5000 which is almost the same amount for the
further
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years.
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Vocabulary: Replace the words closures, openings, drop with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "graph" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "provides" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "showed" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "drop" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "dramatic" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • retail landscape
  • net growth
  • market dynamics
  • economic indicators
  • fluctuations
  • pivotal
  • consumption patterns
  • e-commerce
  • brick-and-mortar
  • downward/upward trend
  • stabilize
  • recession
  • boom
  • retail sector
  • closure rate
  • inauguration/opening rate
  • consumer market
  • saturate
  • commercial viability
  • profitability
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