The graph below shows the number of shops that closed and the number of new shops that opened in one country between 2011 and 2018. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and to make comparisons where relevant.
The presented line graph illustrates the
amount
of shops that Change the quantifier
number
closet
and open in one nation between two time periods. From an Correct your spelling
close
overall
perspective, as can be seen from the graph, two categories experienced increase
and decrease indicators during the period.
The number of openings sharply declined between 2011 and 2012, from around 8,500 shops to nearly 4000. In the wake Add an article
an increase
of
, the line graph depicts the process of growth until 2014 Correct pronoun usage
thisof
and
Correct word choice
which
reached
approximately 6000 shopping markets. Wrong verb form
reaching
Next
Add a comma
,Next
consequently
the points of openings dropped in 2015,
and remained steady until 2017 with 4000 markets. Ultimately, Remove the comma
apply
at the end
of the period shows 3000 shopping centers
.
In terms of the Change the spelling
centres
trends
closures did not amend like an opening until 2014 around 6500 shopping areas. Between 2014 and 2015 experienced Add a comma
,trends
extreme
decline from, 6500 to 500 shopping zones. In spite Correct article usage
an extreme
of
, in the short period sharply inclined to 5000 the numbers of shops.Correct pronoun usage
thisof
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