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The graph below compares changes in the birth rates of China and the USA between 1920 and 2000

The graph below compares changes in the birth rates of China and the USA between 1920 and 2000
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The line graph depicts the average
rate
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birth between 1920
and200
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and 200
 in different two countries .It is clear from the graph
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the amount of
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birth
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US
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the US
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 continuously dominated in
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a specfic
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specfic
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specific
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the brith
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brith
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birth
ration
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ratio
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 in China ranked the lowest throughout 30 years nearly . In 1920 the percentage of
brith
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birth
was
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fluctuated with
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about
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of about
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 10 %, in the following 10 years the
rate
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birth
it
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reached
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15%.
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From
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 1935 to 1945 the
rate
 of
brith
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birth
 sharply fell to 5%. After 5 years the amount of
brith
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birth
 increased remarkably peaking at approximately 20%. From 1945
to2000
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to 2000
 the
percent
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 of birth had decreased from 20%to5%. In
US
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the US
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 there was a
down trend
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downtrend
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around
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of around
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 5% in 1945.
By
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,contrast
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 an obvious increment can
also
 be seen from 5% in 1945 to 15% in 1950.
Intrestingtly
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Interestingly
,
since
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from
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1950 to 2000 the
rate
 of birth saw a clear of downward trend 15 to 1 in order of that.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words rate, brith with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "graph" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 2 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • birth rate
  • demographics
  • population control policy
  • One-Child Policy
  • Baby Boom
  • fertility rate
  • census data
  • fluctuations
  • societal norms
  • economic prosperity
  • Great Leap Forward
  • family planning
  • contraception
  • workforce participation
  • aging population
  • urbanization
  • trend analysis
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