the graph belows shows the percentage of households woth different kinds of technology in the U.S. from 1995 to 1999.

the graph belows shows the percentage of households woth different kinds of technology in the U.S. from 1995 to 1999.
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The line graph illustrates information about the percentage of households with varied types of technology in the U.S. from 1995 to 1995.
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, it can be seen that all groups of technology in the house increased throughout the survey period and internet access information started in 1998 and still rose in 2002. In 1996, the percentage of
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was nearly 60 which was the major percentage and
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consistency rose and reached approximately 82 in 2002 and was the top of all kinds of technologies.
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, the home computer was about 30 in 1996 and gradually increased to around 55 in 2002. Turning to mobile phone information, the figure starts at approximately 18 in 1996 and slightly rose to about 25 in 1998.
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, it sharply increased to around 42 and remained at the same point in 2000. In 2002, there dramatically rose to 70 in 2002. The internet access data was different that started from 10 in 1998
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sharply increased to about 35 in 2000 and continuously rose and reached around 45 in 2002.
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