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It is often argued that it is difficult to get children to read. Why do you think this is? What measures could be taken to encourage children to read more? Give reasons for your answer and any include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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It is believed that getting
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 to read can be extremely challenging these days.
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 challenge is caused by adrenaline releaser activities and can later lead to society’s lower per capita book reading. Some possible solutions to the problem mentioned above will be discussed in the following paragraphs.
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 the development of technology, more and more
children
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 are being attracted to VR (virtual reality) and video games which can release a high dose of adrenaline. By
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 phenomenon, activities like reading that cause lower levels of
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 hormone in their blood can be exhausting for them.
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, they refuse to spend their
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 reading
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. One way for solving
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 problem is to teach balance to the young generation.
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 means we should show them the different aspects of life and how they can take control of each one on their own.
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, spending enough
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 on school activities, family and entertainment can be good practice for
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. In
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 way, they can get
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 having a balanced life from an early age. Another solution to the mentioned problem is being a good role model for
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.
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 means as their parents we should practically prove that
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 are our best friends.
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 having a small library at the corner of the house, discussing stories and ideas from
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 to
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, and going to bookstores together on the weekends are some ways to keep them interested and motivated when it comes to reading
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. In conclusion,
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 it seems hard to get the young to read these days, there are ways to make a connection between their minds and
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. On one hand, parents can teach them to have equilibrium in all parts of their lives, and
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, as their role models, they should take small steps to keep their kids interested.

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