The graph below shows the number of tourists visiting a particular Caribbean island between 2010 and 2017
The chart illustrates how many tourists visited a particular Caribbean
island
from 2010 to 2017.
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Overall
, it can be clearly seen that the total Linking Words
number
of visitors who stayed on Use synonyms
cruise
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ships
and stayed on the Use synonyms
island
increased significantly over the frame period, Use synonyms
although
the trend of tourists who stayed on Linking Words
cruise
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ships
versus those who stayed on the Use synonyms
island
shows an opposite trend toward the other.
In 2010, the Use synonyms
number
of tourist staying on Use synonyms
cruise
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ships
were lower compared to the Use synonyms
number
of tourist staying on the Use synonyms
island
, but Use synonyms
then
its trends moved up moderately until 2017. Linking Words
In contrast
, Linking Words
although
there was an increasing Linking Words
number
of tourists who stayed on the Use synonyms
island
in 2012, Use synonyms
however
, the movement remained constant Linking Words
afterward
until the end of 2017.
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afterwards
On the other hand
, Linking Words
at the end
of 2017, staying on Linking Words
cruise
Use synonyms
ships
was the most preferable place to stay for the tourist as opposed to the visitor’s choice of staying on the Use synonyms
island
.Use synonyms
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Vocabulary: The word "stayed" was used 6 times.
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