The graph below shows the number of tourists visiting a particular Caribbean island between 2010 and 2017
The chart illustrates how many tourists visited a particular Caribbean
island
from 2010 to 2017.
Overall
, it can be clearly seen that the total number
of visitors who stayed on cruise
ships
and stayed on the island
increased significantly over the frame period, although
the trend of tourists who stayed on cruise
ships
versus those who stayed on the island
shows an opposite trend toward the other.
In 2010, the number
of tourist staying on cruise
ships
were lower compared to the number
of tourist staying on the island
, but then
its trends moved up moderately until 2017. In contrast
, although
there was an increasing number
of tourists who stayed on the island
in 2012, however
, the movement remained constant afterward
until the end of 2017.
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afterwards
On the other hand
, at the end
of 2017, staying on cruise
ships
was the most preferable place to stay for the tourist as opposed to the visitor’s choice of staying on the island
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