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some people believe that professionals, such as doctors and engineers, should be required to work in the country where they did their training. Others believe they should be free to work in another country if they wish. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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Nowadays, the migration of professionals is a subject of debate. Some people believe that knowledgeable individuals,
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 as doctors and engineers, should be obliged to
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 in the
country
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 where they received their training. Some others, including me, believe that they should have the freedom to
work
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 everywhere they want, as they can find better jobs and receive some essential skills. On the one hand, when people study in a
country
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, they may get more information about the structure of the
country
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 in the healthcare and engineering areas.
As a result
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, it is more likely that they can address problems in those areas after graduating.
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, In Iran, medical students spend hours of their courses in hospitals,
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 they have better information about the most common diseases in Iran than those studying in other
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.
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, in some cases, students receive subsidized education or scholarship to study. Requiring them to
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 in the
country
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 where they receive those funds, can be seen as a form of repayment for the investment made by the government or other organizations.
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, the government can set up some pre-
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 education programs for those studying in other
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 to inform them about the
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’s structure.
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, some of those skilled individuals pay the money they received as scholarships or funds if they want to leave the
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.
On the other hand
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, allowing students to
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 in other
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 may provide some opportunities to find better jobs with higher salaries, especially for those who live in developing
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.
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, the amount of salary received by a doctor working in Iran is not comparable with the amount in the United States.
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, some
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 are the leading positions in some fields, which can provide better situations for professionals to stay in the competitive market. To illustrate, the United States is considered a centre of technology
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 the significant advancements and innovations that have originated from there, so software engineers can develop some valuable skills only there. In conclusion, I believe that it is wise to allow professional individuals to
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 in another
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 after graduating if they want, as they can find better opportunities and can develop some valuable skills.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • professionals
  • doctors
  • engineers
  • required
  • training
  • home country
  • cultural
  • linguistic
  • advantages
  • economic impact
  • free
  • another country
  • globalization
  • international collaboration
  • improving
  • skills
  • knowledge
  • experience
  • opinion
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