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Some people believe it is better to raise children in the city, while others consider the countryside to be a more suitable choice. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

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Some would argue that raising a
child
 in the urban area is beneficial,
while
 others say that the
Countryside
 is a more preferable choice.
Although
 upbringing in a rural area allows for enhancing social and communication skills, I believe that it is better to raise
children
 in the
city
 as
this
 gives them great chances to get high-pay scale jobs and a state-of-the-art
education
 facility. On the one hand, the
countryside
 gives the opportunities to
children
 to Connect will other
people
 easily and
this
 will help them in improving their social
as well as
 communication skills too. As
people
 in these areas do not have a very hectic life as compared to metropolitan
people
's lives, and
due to
this
 they could spend more time with their
children
.
For example
,
Children
 whose upbringing happened in the
countryside
 area. are less likely to engage in bad habits as compared to their counterparts.
However
, I believe that those benefits are not quite enough because these only do not help in the holistic development of one
child
.
On the other hand
, raising a
child
 in the
City
 open up a lot of opportunity. The
city
 has an advanced technology-equipped
education
 system
as well as
 rapidly improving infrastructure which will help each
child
 to pursue the best
education
 and to get a better job.
Children
 who live in the
city
also
 connect with other like-minded
people
 very easily and prosper together in future.
for instance
, normally argued the globe we can see that the
children
 who get their
education
 in reputed educational institutions are in a better position and high paying jobs. I believe
this
 method is preferable because it gives more benefits than the
countryside
 one. In conclusion, even though
children
 can prosper socially very well in the
countryside
, the
city
 provides them with even more opportunities for their holistic development.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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