You are a student living in university accommodation. The heating has not worked for some time. Write a letter to the management. In your letter Explain why you complain; Describe the problems Tell what you want them to do

Dear Sir, Good day. I would like to bring your notice that the heating has not worked for some time in my

room

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. My name is Mike, studying at South wellington university, Canada, and my student admission number is 08D1u3112. I am staying at college accommodation

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number 201 next to Marker's Hall south west corner of the campus. As I said, the heating system in my

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is not working sometimes

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issue I am not able to sleep during the winter ,especially at night indeed.

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, the water is being leaked from the heater as well.

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, my entire

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is drenched

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. Kindly please get

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issue fixed as early as possible. I already informed to local electrical department, who will take care of

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, they need approval from the management of the university. So, please approve my request. Hope you will consider my request. I would like to hear from you soon.

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faithful, Mike

ravikrishna045

Apr 13, 2023

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