The chart below shows the number of travellers using three major airports in New York City between 1995 and 2000.
The bar graph illustrates the figures for travellers that used John F. Kennedy, Newark and
LaGuardia
airports in the city of New York from 1995 to 2000.
Overall
, the users
of all airports increased noticeably. Correct quantifier usage
number of users
While
the number of visitors that used LaGuardia
saw a significant increase, other
two airports exhibited a small increase between 1995 and 2000.
Correct article usage
the other
Through
the entire period, Change preposition
Throughout
LaGuardia
's value
demonstrated the highest visitors, except the year 1998 which was the only year that John F. Kennedy replaced LaGuardia
as the dominant airport. Its quantity starting
at around 35 Wrong verb form
started
million
passengers in 1995, and then
increased year-over-year consistantly
to approximately 50 Correct your spelling
consistently
million
passengers until 1999. Its value
drammatically
grew to just below 70 Correct your spelling
dramatically
million
passengers at the end
of the period.
In the first three year
, the figures for John F. Kennedy Change to a plural noun
years
airport
roughly Capitalize word
Airport
trippled
its Correct your spelling
tripled
value
from nearly 15 million
people to around 45 million
people. In addition
to this
, its value
hovered at this
level over the remaining period. ın contrast, Newark's value
was around 15 million
individuals which steadily inclined to just over 40 million
individuals in 1998, before remaining relatively stable at this
level over the next two years.Submitted by historicalpen on
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