The maps below show the changes in the art gallery ground floor in 2015 and present day.
The given pictures illustrate the differences in the layout of an art gallery’s ground
floor
from 2015 to current time.
Overall
, it is easy to recognize that there are so many changes in the design of the ground floor
with the addition of buildings and replacement
of some positions. Especially, a new ramp for Correct article usage
the replacement
wheelchair
and a lift are built to give priority to Fix the agreement mistake
wheelchairs
disabilities
people.
On the right-hand side of the ground Replace the word
disabled
floor
, the layout remains unchanged in both size
and position of the three exhibition
rooms, numbering from one to three. Also
, the entrance
is kept in the middle of the South.
In contrast
, the changes occur mainly on two thirds
Add a hyphen
two-thirds
size
of the left-hand side of the floor
. The ramp for Correct article usage
the wheelchair
wheelchair
appears on the left outside, next to the Fix the agreement mistake
wheelchairs
entrance
. Besides
, the stairs was
opposite to Change the verb form
were
entrance
in the past, Correct article usage
the entrance
Correct word choice
but is
is
moved to Correct subject-verb agreement
are
left
a little bit now to set the lift between the stairs and Correct article usage
the left
exhibition
room three. Moreover
, the entrance
hall is being
smaller in Unnecessary verb
apply
size
because of moving
of Correct article usage
the moving
receptionist
Correct article usage
the receptionist
area
from position
near the stairs to the Add an article
a position
center
of the Change the spelling
centre
floor
. Additionally
, the
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apply
exhibition
room four is split into two smaller rooms, namely the temporary exhibition
and the children’s area
. The café area
is not only reduced in size
but also
replaced by the gallery shop. Finally
, the gallery office is demolished to create an open-plan area
with the vending machine next to the gallery shop.Submitted by joyce.ta213 on
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