Some people believe it is better to raise children in the city, while others consider the countryside to be a more suitable choice. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Some individuals argue that it is always the best
option
to raise infants in the city
, however
, others will consider those suburbs will be more suitable places
for children
caring than cities
. This
essay is going to discuss both choices and conclude with my opinion at the end
.
To begin
with, we can see that most people would like to set up their kids in town due to
various reasons. Firstly
, there are many facilities, which will aid parents
in the city
to hoist their adolescents. Secondly
, we can see that not only many childcare services but also
many schools and other infrastructures will be used to take care of the children
health and their academics indeed. Change noun form
children's
For instance
, The New York Times published that Tier 1 and 2 cities
are the best places
to raise 60 per cent of children
in the national population. In
addition
, raising children
in the city
will ease the life of parents
.
Some individuals argue that it is always the best option
to raise infants in the
city
, Change the capitalization
City
however
, others will consider those suburbs will be more suitable places
for children
caring than cities
. This
essay is going to discuss both choices and conclude with my opinion at the end
.
To begin
with, we can see that most people would like to set up their kids in town due to
various reasons. Firstly
, there are many facilities, which will aid parents
in the city
to hoist their adolescents. Secondly
, we can see that not only many childcare services but also
many schools and other infrastructures will be used to take care of the children
health and their academics indeed. Change noun form
children's
For instance
, The New York Times published that Tier 1 and 2 cities
are the best places
to raise 60 per cent of scion in the national population. In
addition
, raising children
in the city
will ease the life of parents
.
On the other hand
, some intellectuals will ascertain that the countryside is the best option
to hoist offspring and the suburbs will not only be good for scions' energy but also
perfectly suit for their health indeed. In
addition
, scion
who Fix the agreement mistake
scions
are
in outposts will get less pollution Change the verb form
is
whereas
it is not possible in city
as well. Correct article usage
the city
For example
, The Hindu newspaper published an article which unveils that adolescents, who are residing in hamlets are able to learn things faster than city
dwellers. In
addition
, Parents
will
also
feel less burdened to raise their young generation.
To summarize, after having a discussion of the above, it is an undeniable fact that it is always the best option
to raise their in the city
due to
various advantages. However
, life in Hamlet is also
unforgettable and it is also
good for offspring indeed in my opinion.Submitted by ravikrishna045 on
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