Some people consider price as the most important thing to think about when buying products (such as cellphones) or services (medical treatments) do you agree or disagree?

The importance of
price
as the main
criteria
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in purchasing decisions is often argued. I completely disagree with
this
because consumers prioritize many other factors like quality and personal preferences over
price
when making their decisions. First of all, when deciding to buy a
product
an individual will always want to buy the best possible option. He will compare the same
product
with different sellers and evaluate the quality and features of each
product
.
For instance
, when buying a smartphone, customers will pay attention to the manufacturing company's reputation, and specifications like camera, operating system, capacity and memory before making the choice.
In addition
, if it is a service like getting medical treatments, customers would want to go to the hospital which has
best
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quality equipment and doctors. If the criteria
is
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up to his standard, he will not care about the expense.
Hence
price
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the price
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is considerably less important in shopping.
Additionally
, the choice of acquiring a good or service relies on personal preference. Customers are sometimes attached to the brand names and are loyal to certain trademarks despite them being highly expensive. Individuals with a status quo ego in their mind
,
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will be willing to pay a high rate to show off their status.
For example
, an iPhone user will continue to be loyal to Apple company and choose iPhones over any other cheaper brand.
Therefore
,
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will not be regarded as important when attachment to the brand name is high.
To sum up
, I believe that the argument of payment value being the most prominent factor is invalid
due to
the fact that consumers have other priorities like the standard of the
product
and personal choices.
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