The diagram below shows how the instant noodles are manufactured. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The process diagram illustrates
step by step
approaches Add a hyphen
step-by-step
how
instant nodules are produced.
Change preposition
to how
Overall
, there are eight steps beginning with the storage in silos of flour
delivered by lorries and ending with packaging
of instant Add an article
the packaging
noodles
. This
packaged food is made of mainly five ingredients, namely, flour
, water, oil, vegetables and spices.
Looking at the first five stages of the manufacturing process, flour
, after having been delivered to storage silos by lorries, is transported to a mixer where it is stirred with water and oil. This
mixture is then
transformed into dough sheets by rollers, followed by cutting in dough strips, which are eventually converted into circular discs.
Taking into consideration of the following steps, firstly
, the noodles
discs are cooked in oil, and Fix the agreement mistake
noodle
after
this
, they are dried. Then
, the dried stacks of noodles
are put in assembled cups where vegetables and spices are added. These cups are labelled and sealed afterwards, ending the manufacturing process. This
is how, instant noodles
are produced in eight steps, starting with flour
delivery by trucks, and finishing with the noodles
being packed in labelled and sealed cups.Submitted by maria.defreitas08 on
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