Some people believe that lessons on becoming a good parent should be included in school curriculum. Others think that it is not essential for students. Discuss both opinions and give your own opinion.

In the current education

system

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there is an opinion that

students

should be taught a course on how their biological caregivers should bring them up.

However

, others do not think

this

is necessary.

This

essay will attempt to understand both perspectives

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while

arguing for the latter point of view. On the one hand, the proponents of the view believe that

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providing information on good

parents

makes

students

understand the significance of caring for others.

For instance

, most

parents

joyfully put the needs of their children above their own, which makes for a very encouraging atmosphere at home.

In addition

, these training classes help in providing a better understanding

on

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balancing

life

despite a busy schedule. To be precise, nowadays,

parents

are

over occupying

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with their routine

life style

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and unable to manage family time which somewhere

keep

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kids

isolating

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from their

parents

.

Hence

, having

the

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such

kind

of awareness programs in the school syllabus would definitely help

young

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generation to balance their

life

in

tight

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schedule

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in future.

On the other hand

, it is argued that

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kind

of initiatives are not required in the early phase of

life

while

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parenting tenure is altogether

is

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another level of

life

. To put it simply,

students

age are too young to

adapt

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such

kind

of knowledge and should not put themselves in the parenting shoes, because

this

would divert them from their current study goal.

For example

, if

students

are provided

such

kind

guidance could make pupils overthinking

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and that might impact their study routine. On

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top of that, there could be

possibilities

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that

kids

would start observing their

parents

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behaviors

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and try to compare

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with, whatever they had been tough during

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and it could bring many misunderstandings between them.

This

can be exemplified

with

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current

parent

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parents

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are going with tough and busy

schedule

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and

sometime

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due to

stress and might not respond as

kids

expected and they might

comparing

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their behavior that would

generate

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a distance between them.

As a result

, providing

such

kind

of knowledge are too soon as it may bring many

discripencies

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discrepancies

between

kids

and

parents

.

To conclude

,

Although

,

this

is mix box and each side has been discussed in

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paragraphs with their significant pons and cons. Undoubtedly, giving parenting awareness to

students

would help them in their future

life

by balancing their busy

life

with

kids

and

as well as

, teach them caring lessons.

However

, other school support not

to follow

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this

pattern as it could bring significant disputes and misunderstanding. I

Personally

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recommend

to follow

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the former view.