Some people believe that lessons on becoming a good parent should be included in school curriculum. Others think that it is not essential for students. Discuss both opinions and give your own opinion.
In the current education
system
there is an opinion that Add a comma
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students
should be taught a course on how their biological caregivers should bring them up. Use synonyms
However
, others do not think Linking Words
this
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while
arguing for the latter point of view.
On the one hand, the proponents of the view believe that Linking Words
by
providing information on good Change preposition
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parents
makes Use synonyms
students
understand the significance of caring for others. Use synonyms
For instance
, most Linking Words
parents
joyfully put the needs of their children above their own, which makes for a very encouraging atmosphere at home. Use synonyms
In addition
, these training classes help in providing a better understanding Linking Words
on
balancing Change preposition
of
life
despite a busy schedule. To be precise, nowadays, Use synonyms
parents
are Use synonyms
over occupying
with their routine Add a hyphen
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and unable to manage family time which somewhere Correct your spelling
lifestyle
keep
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keeps
kids
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isolating
from their Wrong verb form
isolated
parents
. Use synonyms
Hence
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kind
of awareness programs in the school syllabus would definitely help Use synonyms
young
generation to balance their Correct article usage
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in Use synonyms
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the tight
a tight
schedule
in future.
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schedules
On the other hand
, it is argued that Linking Words
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these kinds
kind
of initiatives are not required in the early phase of Use synonyms
life
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while
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parenting tenure is altogether Remove the comma
apply
is
another level of Unnecessary verb
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life
. To put it simply, Use synonyms
students
age are too young to Use synonyms
adapt
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adopt
such
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kind
of knowledge and should not put themselves in the parenting shoes, because Use synonyms
this
would divert them from their current study goal. Linking Words
For example
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students
are provided Use synonyms
such
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kind
guidance could make pupils overthinking Use synonyms
about
and that might impact their study routine. On Change preposition
apply
the
top of that, there could be Correct article usage
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possibilities
that Fix the agreement mistake
possibility
kids
would start observing their Use synonyms
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parents
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parent's
parents'
behaviors
and try to compare Change the spelling
behaviours
it
with, whatever they had been tough during Correct pronoun usage
them
session
and it could bring many misunderstandings between them. Add an article
the session
a session
This
can be exemplified Linking Words
with
current Change preposition
by
parent
are going with tough and busy Fix the agreement mistake
parents
schedule
and Fix the agreement mistake
schedules
sometime
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sometimes
due to
stress and might not respond as Linking Words
kids
expected and they might Use synonyms
comparing
their behavior that would Change the verb form
compare
be comparing
generate
a distance between them. Wrong verb form
generating
As a result
, providing Linking Words
such
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kind
of knowledge are too soon as it may bring many Use synonyms
discripencies
between Correct your spelling
discrepancies
kids
and Use synonyms
parents
.
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To conclude
, Linking Words
Although
, Linking Words
this
is mix box and each side has been discussed in Linking Words
above
paragraphs with their significant pons and cons. Undoubtedly, giving parenting awareness to Correct article usage
the above
students
would help them in their future Use synonyms
life
by balancing their busy Use synonyms
life
with Use synonyms
kids
and Use synonyms
as well as
, teach them caring lessons. Linking Words
However
, other school support not Linking Words
to follow
Change the verb form
following
this
pattern as it could bring significant disputes and misunderstanding. I Linking Words
Personally
recommend Fix capitalization
personally
to follow
the former view.Change the verb form
following
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