There should only be one government in the world rather than a national government for each country. Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?

Many opine that, on the global platform, there should only be
one
state authority rather than a national
government
for each and every country.
Although
this
can help to improve globalisation, I believe that there are more drawbacks because it will negatively impact
on
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local
people
. The main reason
people
want to see worldwide only
one
government
is that
this
can be helpful in improving work efficiency
as well as
better job opportunities for every person around the globe.
This
is why, globalisation
encourage
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equal pay scale around the
world
and only
one
government
also
implement standard regulation throughout the
world
, so
people
do not have to bother about different kinds of salary structure and law.
For example
, when only
one
government
handle trade around the
world
,
he
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imposes
same
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financial
as well as
regulation structure on every country.
However
, I think that by doing
this
only wealthy
people
are benefited from it, not destitute
one
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. The disadvantage is that doing management from that much higher level is quite difficult
for
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most of the time.
This
is because,
government
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have to focus only on
a
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major areas
such
as global warming, trade war,
tarrifc
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tariff
terrific
issues, and so on.
As a result
, he cannot have the time to draw his attention towards a minor
issue
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issues
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like providing clean drinking water,
sanitation
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,
build
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regional infrastructure.
For instance
,
government
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only have to focus on a large scale, as
he
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it
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does not have time for dealing
regional
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issues. I am of the opinion that every country should have their's
government
to handle regional issues very well. In conclusion, even though
economy
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can prosper very rapidly when it
handled
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on
world
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a world
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level, for the holistic development of each and every person,
country-wise
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government
should be needed there.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • centralized decision-making
  • global challenges
  • territorial disputes
  • economies of scale
  • policy implementation
  • cultural homogenization
  • national sovereignty
  • internal conflicts
  • authoritarianism
  • individual freedoms
  • global governance
  • unification
  • efficiency
  • resource allocation
  • social systems
  • governing body
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