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write a paragraph about the positive and negative aspects of moving home

write a paragraph about the positive and negative aspects of moving home
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Moving house has both its upsides and downsides. On the positive side, it can bring about positive changes
such
 as a fresh start, new experiences, and improved living conditions.
However
, moving can
also
 be a daunting task requiring much effort, time, and resources. It can be emotionally challenging to leave behind familiar places and friends, and the process can
also
 be expensive, with additional costs
such
 as repairs of new furnishings. In the end, the decision to move should be carefully considered, with the positive and negative aspects weighing up to make an informed choice.
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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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