the pie charts below show the average househlod expenditure in a country in 1950 and 2010.

the pie charts below show the average househlod expenditure in a country in 1950 and 2010.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for the pie charts below show the average househlod expenditure in a country in 1950 and 2010.
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The pie chart illustrates the information regarding the
amount
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spent on different facilities from 1950 to 2010.The data is calibrated in percentage.
Overall
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,in 1950 the maximum
amount
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was spent on housing
whereas
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in 2010 the maximum
amount
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was spent on food. At a fleeting glance, in 1950 a large proportion of the money was spent on housing as compared to other facilities.The
amount
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used for food was greater which was 11.2% in comparison to education.Interestingly,the expenditure spent on health care and transportation was 2.4% and 3.3% respectively.The
amount
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spent on other was less whilst on education which was 6.6%. Probing ahead,in 2010 more
amount
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of money was used for food
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by
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34%.
In addition
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,money spent on housing was more than others which
were
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was
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19.2%.Surprisingly,expenditure used for education and health care was 6.3% and 4.5% respectively.
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, the
amount
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spent on transportation was less as compared to housing by 8%.The minimum
amount
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was used by transportation which was 4.5% only.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words amount with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "compared" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 8 times.
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