The table and charts below give information on the police budget for 2017 and 2018 in one area of Britain. The table shows where the money came form and the charts show how it was distributed.

The table and charts below give information on the police budget for 2017 and 2018 in one area of Britain. The table shows where the money came form and the charts show how it was distributed.
The given table
give
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data about the police
budget
for 2017 and 2018 in Ireland,Italy,Spain,Sweden and Turkey. Looking at the graph as a whole,
the
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food
,
drinks
and
tobacco
is the most spent money in
there
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countries.As you can see, the lowest spend money on leisure and education in five
countires
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countries
counties
. In detail,the
food
,
drinks
and
tobacco
in Turkey most spend at 32.14% public
dubget
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budget
,and
also
the proportion of
food
,
drinks
and
tobacco
most spent at 28.91% in Ireland.The rate of spend
food
,
drinks
and
tobacco
different
around
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14% between
in
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Turkey and in Sweden.
The leisure
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and education
is
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are
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the lowest spend
pulice
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police
budget
at 1.98% in Spain.In
adition
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addition
,the proportion of
budget
at 5.40% in Sweden is the lowest
the
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each
countries
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country
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.
Moreover
,the proportion of
budget
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the budget
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are
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is
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different
around
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from
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more than 20%
from
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for
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food
,
drinks
and
tobacco
to leisure and
eduction
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education
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in all
countires
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countries
,
then
the rate of
boudget
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budget
different
about
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from
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more than 5% between clothing and footwear in Ireland,Italy and Spain.
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Vocabulary: Replace the words budget, food, drinks, tobacco with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "give" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "give" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
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