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Many people no longer read newspaper or watch TV news programmes. Instead they get the news about the world from the internet.

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It is true that the habit of reading
newspapers
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 or watching the
news
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 on
TV
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 is gradually being overshadowed by the fact that a myriad of
citizens
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 absorbs
information
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 on the
internet
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. From my perspective,
this
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 practice is beneficial to a certain extent thanks to the convenience and
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-saving money.
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 essay will elaborate on my viewpoint. On the one hand, advocates of said opinion have their rational grounds.
First,
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a legion of busy individuals cannot always watch
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 or read the newspaper.
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 of buying
newspapers
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 or watching
TV
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, they can go online to get
information
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 quickly anytime, anywhere. In reality, in Vietnam, few people can wait until 7pm to watch the
news
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 and catch the
information
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 of the day, which is very
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-consuming.
Second,
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citizens
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 can save more
time
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 and money when they use the
Internet
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 to be informed. Interestingly, buying and reading a newspaper or watching
TV
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 takes ample amounts of
time
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. To exemplify, it is likely that businessmen are always busy with their job in a company, so they no longer have
time
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 for reading the
news
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 or watching
TV
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 every evening.
On the other hand
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, the above arguments are insufficient to overshadow the shortcomings of the topic in question. The most pertinent reason is that a significant number of
citizens
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 are fond of reading the newspaper or watching
TV
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 more than the author's accuracy which is very high. To be specific, it is not like online
news
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 on the
Internet
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, which can post the wrong
information
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 to make
citizens
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 apprehensive. A perfect epitome of
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 is that in Covid-19 there is a significant amount of misinformation to petrify residents.
In addition
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, individuals can read
newspapers
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 everywhere without needing wifi or logging in to any apps. Specifically, residents do not have to enter, customize, sign up or remember a password to read notifications. If one day the
internet
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 ceases to exist,
newspapers
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 will be more respected. In conclusion, it is indisputable that using the
internet
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 not only saves
time
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 and money but
also
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 can capture
information
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 anytime, anywhere.
Nonetheless
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,
newspapers
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 or watching
TV
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 will give accurate
information
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 and data and do not need wifi to be able to use it.
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