The charts below give information about attendance at Australian entertainment venus and admission prices to those venues in 2009.
The given charts illustrate
about
the number of people who went to the three different Change preposition
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entertainment
venues in Australia, their
corresponding Correct word choice
and their
ticket
prices per person or family in seven entertainment
categories in year
2009.
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the year
Overall
, the cinemas
is the most visited place among the three Fix the agreement mistake
cinema
entertainment
in Autralia
which had the highest number in Correct your spelling
Australia
year
2009, Change the article
the year
while
the least in sports. This
category as well registered the most
cheapest Change the adjective
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ticket
sale for a single entry or in a group in that year.
In 2009, Correct article usage
the cinemas
cinemas
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cinemas'
cinema's
figure
rose exponentially as many Fix the agreement mistake
figures
Ausee
enjoy watching movies, rising to just above 1000. Far behind theme parks, unlike Correct your spelling
users
cinemas
, just above quarter went for enjoyment. On the other hand
, sports are the least favorite
type of fun which accumulated only an estimated 180.
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favourite
Furthermore
, the second chart presents four of the seven entertainment
events: football Game
- (AFL,NRL, NRU) and theme parks are the most expensive admission prices per person or a family group approximately between 70$-75$ per Fix the agreement mistake
Games
ticket
and 210$-298$ per family ticket
(for four people) in the given period. Trail behind Basketball at 34% (1 ticket
) and 80$ ( for family), and Cricket game with sale
price for each Add an article
a sale
the sale
ticket
( 24$) and family (80$). Cinemas
demonstrate a
competitive Correct article usage
apply
prices
which Correct the article-noun agreement
price
is
the cheapest compared to other fun events, a significant 15$ per Change the verb form
are
ticket
and for a group of four at 55$.Submitted by lsc_00000 on
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