Some people believe that time spent on televiosion, video and computer games can be beneficial to children. Others believe this has a negative effects on a child. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Contemporarily, with the aid of modern technologies, there are many
people
who believe by spending time
on visual artificial entertainment will bring more benefit to youth people
, while
some other people
have the opposite value. In my opinion, children
should interact with their friends instead
of relying too much on technology.
To begin
with, we considered two positive impacts for children
watching and playing video games
. Firstly
, this
activity will improve their creativity in terms of problem-solving skills. For example
, playing adventure games
like mario
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Mario
bross
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bros
,
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apply
people
to evade the enemy and make some alternate possible moves to reach the base. Indirectly this
experience will be used in real-life situations, so the children
become more resilient to face the problems. Not only enlarging creativity but also
practicing
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practising
games
, especially with two tag teams will elevate our children
's capability to become sharper. Those kinds of abilities will bring useful effects for our children
to face real problems.
On the other hand
, some people
believe that frequently playing video games
, will bring addiction habit to playing continuously and make people
become lazy. Instead
of using their time
for studying, while
the young generation has acknowledged games
, they prefer to spend their time
on them. It will affect their habit and following the consequences, the majority of children
will get bad marks on their exams. Not only reduce the capability of our children
but also
will worsen their eye's health because they spent the whole day on the screen. In the long-term approach, neither playing games
nor watching videos will bring more drawbacks to a child's life.
In conclusion, artificial visual entertainment brings both positive and negative ways, and children
should spend their time
doing other physical activities.Submitted by prisetiawan on
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