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Some believe that professionals should be required to work in the country where they did their training. Others believe they should be free to work in another country if they wish.

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a group of
people
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 have the opinion that experts like doctors and engineers should
work
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 in the
country
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 where they studied
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 others believe they should have the freedom to
work
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 anywhere they want. In my ,mind they should have the authority to go abroad from their
country
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 to
work
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. on the one ,hand it's the right of the
country
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's
people
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 that
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 benefits from
people
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 who have an education in their
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. much money has been spent until a student reaches the doctorate and engineering level and
people
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 of that
country
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 afford these costs as tax. so
people
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 should use these results. for ,example my cousin is a doctor. After he graduated from university, he decided to stay in Iran and job here. his progress was awesome and many patients refer to him.
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 month he won a prize for his efforts in medicine and
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 served his fellow citizens. he has
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 view that I grew up in
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country
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 and should serve them. on the other ,hand some
people
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 believe that it's the right of each human to
work
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 anywhere they wish. the
people
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 are free and we can not restrict them because
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 restriction causes them to avoid their abilities and cannot do their best. in ,addition going to other countries can give specialists
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 point that they can
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 more experience and reaches more ability at their job. so it has a great advantage for all
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 worldwide.
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 , they can transfer their information and skill to others. For ,instance my friend was an engineer. he decided to immigrate to Germany. he has been working there. He can
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 more knowledge rather than here and
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 his abilities and knowledge grow up because he is in enormous communication with foreign engineering. in ,conclusion
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, creating a high cost to become a doctor or engineer in a
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 and having a similar language or culture and a familiar field, I personally believe that experts should have the freedom to go the other countries to
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 more wisdom and improve in their job, plus share their knowledge with other
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...do you agree or disagree?...do you think...?...your opinion...?

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