Some believe that professionals should be required to work in the country where they did their training. Others believe they should be free to work in another country if they wish.

a group of
people
have the opinion that experts like doctors and engineers should
work
in the
country
where they studied
while
others believe they should have the freedom to
work
anywhere they want. In my ,mind they should have the authority to go abroad from their
country
to
work
. on the one ,hand it's the right of the
country
's
people
that
gain
benefits from
people
who have an education in their
country
. much money has been spent until a student reaches the doctorate and engineering level and
people
of that
country
afford these costs as tax. so
people
should use these results. for ,example my cousin is a doctor. After he graduated from university, he decided to stay in Iran and job here. his progress was awesome and many patients refer to him.
Last
month he won a prize for his efforts in medicine and
also
served his fellow citizens. he has
this
view that I grew up in
this
country
and should serve them. on the other ,hand some
people
believe that it's the right of each human to
work
anywhere they wish. the
people
are free and we can not restrict them because
this
restriction causes them to avoid their abilities and cannot do their best. in ,addition going to other countries can give specialists
this
point that they can
gain
more experience and reaches more ability at their job. so it has a great advantage for all
people
worldwide.
besides
, they can transfer their information and skill to others. For ,instance my friend was an engineer. he decided to immigrate to Germany. he has been working there. He can
gain
more knowledge rather than here and
also
his abilities and knowledge grow up because he is in enormous communication with foreign engineering. in ,conclusion
however
, creating a high cost to become a doctor or engineer in a
country
and having a similar language or culture and a familiar field, I personally believe that experts should have the freedom to go the other countries to
gain
more wisdom and improve in their job, plus share their knowledge with other
people
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