In some countires the average weigh of people is increasing and their levels of health and fitness are decreasing. What do you think are the cause of these problems and what measures could be taken to solve them?

Over the

last

few years,

obesiy

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obesity

has become a serious problem in some

countires

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countries

. Today, many

people

tend to be overweight and do not

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any kind of sports. I opine that

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obesity is increasing day by day

in

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all over the world. So, it is important to take steps to

poplulariz

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popularise

a healthy lifestyle and proper nutrition. On the one hand, There

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array

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of reasons for them.

Firstly

, fitness centres are too expensive to visit on a regular base.

Secondly

, many

people

are

eatting

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eating

too much unhealthy

food

such

as processed

food

. to

illustate

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illustrate

, it is very well known that use

plam

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palm

oil in baking

instead

of natural utter.

Morever

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Moreover

,

people

do not work hard

such

as

exerciese

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exercise

,

cycling

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or cycling

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.

Thus

,

people

like junk

food

.

On the other hand

,

government

shoould

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should

spend

mony

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money

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fore

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for

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garden

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and

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the park

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park

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parks

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. Rent should be reduced for

fittness

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fitness

center

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centers

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by the

government

.

For example

, Oxford

univercity surved

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University surveyed

on

people

and revealed that

,

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people

who are a healthy diet did not have obesity.

Furthermore

, human being

take

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always healthy diet

such

as sprouts,

fruits

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and fruits

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.

Government

should ban the sale of processed

food

.

To sum up

, being overweight has become a real challenge in the

moden

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modern

world,

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to many reasons for

thatsuch

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that such

as, processed

food

,

unaffordalbe

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unaffordable

affordable

fitness centres and lack of knowledge of a healthy way of life.

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Jacking

support of

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an above

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argument, the main responsibility for solving

problem

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a problem

the problem

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is

that

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government

,

eduational

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educational

authorities and

prople

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people

.