You are going to arrange a special party at your home next week. You want to invite a local artist who is a playback singer. Write a letter to him.

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Dear Mr Doston I am your neighbour Diyor. My family and I are your fans. The reason I am writing to you is that we are going to have a

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at our house next week. My mother and my father are the reason for

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. The purpose of

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is to express our gratitude to our parents for their hard work, my brother and I want to give them a house, a car and a ticket for Hajj. So we would like to invite you to our

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next week and ask you to play your parenting songs live for our parents.

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is very important to us,

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why it is important for us to hear your best song, live with a guitar and we would like to ask you to do the same. We will be happy if you visit our

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and fulfil our request. I look forward to receiving a prompt reply! Your sincerely! Diyor

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Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

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Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

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Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

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6 paragraphs

164 words

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