You are going to arrange a special party at your home next week. You want to invite a local artist who is a playback singer. Write a letter to him.

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Dear Mr Doston I am your neighbour Diyor. My family and I are your fans. The reason I am writing to you is that we are going to have a

party

at our house next week. My mother and my father are the reason for

this

party

. The purpose of

this

party

is to express our gratitude to our parents for their hard work, my brother and I want to give them a house, a car and a ticket for Hajj. So we would like to invite you to our

party

next week and ask you to play your parenting songs live for our parents.

This

party

is very important to us,

that is

why it is important for us to hear your best song, live with a guitar and we would like to ask you to do the same. We will be happy if you visit our

party

and fulfil our request. I look forward to receiving a prompt reply! Your sincerely! Diyor

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