The graph below shows the number of tourists visiting a particular Caribbean island between 2010 and 2017.
The line graph illustrates the rate of attendance
one
Caribbean Change preposition
on one
island
by tourists
over a period of 7 years. Overall
, it is clear that
there is a noticeable increase in general
visiting Add an article
the general
island
. The number of Correct article usage
the island
tourists
choosing to stay on a cruise ship or on the island
show
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shows
a
considerable growth as well.
In 2010, the figure for visitors who preferred to stay on cruise ships was approximately 250000, but Correct article usage
apply
then
experienced fluctuations by 2013 and, finally
, increased to 2
Correct article usage
a 2
million
attendance rate by 2017. Meanwhile, the number of tourists
staying on island
started at just over 700000 in 2010 followed by a gradual rise to 1,5 Add an article
the island
million
visitors by 2015. Afterwards, the figure saw a slight decline in 2016,
but Remove the comma
apply
then
rose back to 1, 5 million
visitors by 2017.
Total
number of Change the article
A total
The total
tourists
stood at 1 million
in 2010,
but Remove the comma
apply
then
showed a sharp jump in attendance of
Change preposition
on
island
and stood at about 2,7 Correct article usage
the island
million
tourists
. The rate stayed the same until 2016,
but Remove the comma
apply
then
witnessed a remarkable rise to 3,5 million
tourists
by 2017.Submitted by fgadzievaa on
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