The charts below show the changes in ownership of electrical appliances and amount of time spent doing housework in households in one country between 1920 and 2019. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The line graphs provide information about the changes in the possession of electronic devices and the time dedicated to
do
housework Change the verb form
doing
in
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particular
country over the period of 100 years. As can be seen from the graphs, the number of electronic equipment, Correct article usage
a particular
such
as washing machines, refrigerators, and vacuum cleaners, experienced a significant growth that, Linking Words
hence
, led to the reduction of time needed for Linking Words
Add an article
the household
household
.
Regarding the first graph, the refrigerator was not used at all compared to other appliances in 1920, at 0%. Fix the agreement mistake
households
However
, it saw a considerable increase and reached a peak, like Linking Words
a
usage of vacuum cleaners, of 100% by 2019. It is notable that the washing machine was the most Correct article usage
the
demanded
in 1920 Replace the word
demand
stood
at 40% Wrong verb form
standing
households
and Change preposition
of households
then
saw a gradual rise to 70% by 2019, Linking Words
that
makes it the least used among others. Vacuum cleaner had a steady rise starting at 30% and ending up at 100%.
Correct pronoun usage
which
According to
the second graph, Linking Words
while
ownership of electronic devices Linking Words
leaped
, the hours for doing daily Change the spelling
leapt
chored
had a remarkable decline. It was 50 hours per week in 1920Correct your spelling
chores
,
but Remove the comma
apply
then
plunged to only 10 hours per week.Linking Words
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