The Graph Below Shows The Proportion Of Four Different Materials That Were Recycled From 1982 To 2010.

The Graph Below Shows The Proportion Of Four Different Materials That Were Recycled From 1982 To 2010.
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The provided line graph shows information regarding how many different materials in a particular country that was recycled from 1982 to 2010. Several trends are apparent.
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, it can be inferred that paper and cardboard Glass containers by 1982 have over 50 per cent, one the one hand, it can be seen recycling rate of material cardboard and glass containers have a few trends,
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, In 1986 both experienced a slight decrease of about 5%, respectively.
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the following next year, they
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increased significantly.
on the other hand
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, it can be seen the trend of recycled aluminium cans stood in 1986 and experienced a moderate increase until the
last
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period about 45 per cent in 2010 .
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, the recycling rate for plastic stood by 1990, experienced a slow increase until
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periods just about 5 per cent 2010.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "last, whereas".
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Vocabulary: The word "trends" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "stood" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 3 times.
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