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People should be at least 21 years old before they're allowed to drive a car. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

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These days more and more
people
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 are opting to travel by
car
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 for a quick commute to their work or college.
This
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 has increased the cases of rash driving resulting in
road
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accidents
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. Will increasing the
age
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 of starting to drive a
car
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 have an effect on
road
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 mishaps? In my opinion,
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 increasing the
age
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 to start driving may reduce unfortunate
road
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 mishaps, many
people
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 will be negatively affected by
this
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. A large number of
people
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 like to travel to college or places of work by
car
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. Increasing the
age
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limit
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 will directly affect these
people
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 as they will have difficulty finding public transport during common office hours. I,
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, prefer taking my personal
car
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 to the office, which helps me reach on time and allows me to avoid huge traffic as I can leave at my preferred time.
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 I do believe that increasing the
age
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 to drive a
car
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 might result in lesser
road
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accidents
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, the disadvantages of
this
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 outweigh the advantages. Increasing the
age
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limit
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 will not necessarily reduce
accidents
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 as it is not the only cause for it. There are several other reasons why
accidents
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 may occur. Setting an
age
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limit
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 will only adversely affect the students/teachers who have to travel almost daily to colleges/universities.
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, my sister has an early morning lecture scheduled so she cannot wait for public transport. The unplanned strikes of public transport
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 make it difficult for the
people
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 travelling daily.
This
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 only adds to the level of frustration of the
people
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.
To sum up
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, the increase in the
age
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limit
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 to start driving will not only bring inconvenience to a large group of
people
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, but it will
also
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 create discomfort and add to frustration for many
people
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.
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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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