The chart below shows information about the challenges people face when they go to live in the other countries.
This
bar chart indicates how people of three different generations 18-34 years old, 35-54 years old and over 55 years old react when they move to other countries. Research options are Learning a new language
, Finding a place to live and Making friends
.
Overall
, in the younger teams, there is similar performance within certain options. Next,
the middle ages of reactions are about even. Lastly
, the reactions of team elderly people are suprisingly
the opposite of the young team.
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surprisingly
Firstly
, Making friends
is the most worrying thing among young people which is 46% and then
Finding a place to stay, at 40% . The least worrying for them is Learning a new language
which is only 29%. Furthermore
, the middle generation has the highest number of
39% finding a house, the second Change preposition
with
is
36% which is meeting new Unnecessary verb
apply
friends
, the
third Correct word choice
and the
is
35% starting a new Unnecessary verb
apply
language
. Lastly
, the over 50s care about how to learn a new language
the most which is
54% Change the verb form
are
after
this
, only 23% and 22% are Making new soulmates and searching for a place to stay.
To sum up
, the young generations are more bothered about making friends
than studying a new language
although
the older ages are totally the opposite of that. the middle team worries about all these sections almost equally.Submitted by mof.v914 on
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