The chart below shows information about the challenges people face when they go to live in the other countries.

The chart below shows information about the challenges people face when they go to live in the other countries.
This
bar chart indicates how people of three different generations 18-34 years old, 35-54 years old and over 55 years old react when they move to other countries. Research options are Learning a new
language
, Finding a place to live and Making
friends
.
Overall
, in the younger teams, there is similar performance within certain options.
Next,
the middle ages of reactions are about even.
Lastly
, the reactions of team elderly people are
suprisingly
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surprisingly
the opposite of the young team.
Firstly
, Making
friends
is the most worrying thing among young people which is 46% and
then
Finding a place to stay, at 40% . The least worrying for them is Learning a new
language
which is only 29%.
Furthermore
, the middle generation has the highest number
of
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39% finding a house, the second
is
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36% which is meeting new
friends
,
the
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third
is
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apply
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35% starting a new
language
.
Lastly
, the over 50s care about how to learn a new
language
the most which
is
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54%
after
this
, only 23% and 22% are Making new soulmates and searching for a place to stay.
To sum up
, the young generations are more bothered about making
friends
than studying a new
language
although
the older ages are totally the opposite of that. the middle team worries about all these sections almost equally.
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