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Some people believe that to be successful at a sport you need a natural ability and others think that hard work and practice can make you successful. Discuss both views and give your opinion?

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It is a controversial issue in today's world that athletes can become successful whether or not it is because of their given talents. In my opinion, having talents is a vantage for some
sports
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 performers
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 some who are well-trained.
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 with, natural ability is what we know as a gifted which many players in
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 games are predicted to have. Regarding gifted condition, their fitness and health condition are more likely to be stable and suit for a certain type of
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;
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, they are trained mostly for an increase in accuracy and strategy.
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, runners from South Africa have
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body
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that is
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 lean and tall, and their physical
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 is conducive to fast movement.
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 the mentioned identity, they can perform great pace than other national runners. In
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 regard,
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 players with their natural expertise can have more time to focus on the method to win.
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, the opposite opinion is that a lot of preparation absolutely helps a person to become a
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 star. Admittedly, individuals' hard work by painstakingly and repeatedly practising will strengthen
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 endurance. The muscle and
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 shape can be formed
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 the athletes with a given ability.
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, swimmers will have stronger shoulders and lungs in order to support their good swimming performance.
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 is to say, hard work and practices enhance one's intelligence and capability in a particular sport. In summary, It is my firm consideration that both a natural skill and a trained skill will lead
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 players to achievement as long as they have an intention and a strong passion for
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 industry.
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