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ou should spend about 40 minutes on this task. Write about the following topic. In many countries large amounts of foods are wasted. Why do you think people waste food in this way? What can be done to reduce the amount of food thrown away? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. You should write at least 254 words.

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There is no doubt these days that
overall
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individuals
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eating habitats. The
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 is why
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the
resident
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residents
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waste
food
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an inapproprate
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inapproprate
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inappropriate
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this
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 I am going to discuss the aetiology of
this
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 of
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 a significant amount of
food
 in some regions .The main reason given to
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support
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nation
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awerness
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awareness
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procces
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process
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and
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the huge effort to prepare
food
.To illustrate , in some countries
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fish
not
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 available ,
while
 the companies
buying
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other region
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this
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 needs .
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, they
not
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do not
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 recognize the difficult undergoes
process
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 in order to
relase
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release
that
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prodect
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product
project
have
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complete
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 and achieve all health and other instructions to meet the human
requierments
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requirements
requirement
.
Moreover
 , the modest sources of
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nutrients
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the
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recent matter in some countries .everyone must
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undersand
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understand
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 to tackle and solve
this
 problem.
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Firstly
, utilise
enoght
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enough
 amount of
food
such
 as
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number
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the number
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 of
peoplemay
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people may
 have a meal and their
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requirement
.
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 , do not throw the extra
food
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 way or can give
to
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it to
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persone
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person
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evident
the
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all
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individuals
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are reponsible
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reponsible
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responsible
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a
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food
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food
 .The governments must
be ensure
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 steps are taken to p
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