The table below gives information about the underground railway systems in six cities. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below. Make comparisons where relevant.

The table below gives information about the underground railway systems in six cities. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below. Make comparisons where relevant.
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The table compares the six networks in terms of their age, size and the number of people who use them each
year
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It is clear that
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the three oldest underground systems are larger and serve significantly more passengers than the newer systems. The London Underground is the oldest
system
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, having opened in 1863. It is
also
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the largest
system
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, with 394
kilometres
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of route. The second largest
system
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, in Paris, is only about half the size of the London underground, with 199
kilometres
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of route.
However
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, it serves more people per
year
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.
While
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only third in terms of size, the Tokyo
system
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is easily the most used, with 1927 million passengers per
year
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. Of the three newer networks, the Washington DC underground is the most extensive, with 126
kilometres
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of route, compared to only 11
kilometres
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and 28
kilometres
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for the Kyoto and Los Angeles systems. The Los Angeles network is the newest, having opened in 2001,
while
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the Kyoto network is the smallest and serves only 45 million passengers per
year
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.
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
Vocabulary: Replace the words year, system, kilometres with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "compares" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • underground railway
  • kilometers of route
  • passengers per year
  • extensive network
  • age of the system
  • analyze
  • correlation
  • outliers
  • notable comparisons
  • trends
  • commuter volume
  • inauguration date
  • modernization
  • historic
  • capacity
  • infrastructure
  • operate
  • transportation hub
  • utilization
  • frequency of service
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