The pie charts and table give information about the total value and sources of fish imported to the US between 1988 and 2000.

The pie charts and table give information about the total value and sources of fish imported to the US between 1988 and 2000.
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The table illustrates the total value between 1988 and 2000,
while
the pie charts compared types of
export
to the US.
Overall
, the percentage of Canadian
export
dropped by over half,
in contrast
to the source of Chinese
export
was account for a significant proportion end of the period. Meanwhile, the total value slightly increased over 13 years. In the first year, the total price is exactly 6.57 billion dollars, the Canadian source of
fish
export
compose of three-fifths
while
Chinese
fish
is just over 10%. After 5 years, the total value slightly increased by nearly 2 billion (8.52).
Furthermore
, both countries’ imports generate over half a
percent
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. In the third year, the total is more than 10 billion dollars, Canadian
fish
is little decreased by 28%
as well as
Chinese
export
is raised one in ten. In 1988, the other type of
fish
accounted for 27% and
then
,
is
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it
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marginally increased before dropping by 3%.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
Vocabulary: Replace the words export, fish with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "slightly" was used 2 times.
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