Nowadays, a lot of people enjoy watching sports on TV. Do you think the advantages of watching sports on TV outweigh the disadvantages?
In today’s life, many
people
are keen on observing sports
events on TV
. In my opinion, I consider that watching sports
on TV
might bring lots of problems than possible benefits. Admittedly, there are some basic pluses of watching sports
on TV
. Firstly
, not everyone is able to attend some sports
events, so in this
case, watching them on TV
could be much more affordable for the audience compared with expenditures on attending offline soccer or basketball game
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games
Moreover
, there are other additional expenses as
flight tickets, accommodation, and pocket money. Correct quantifier usage
such as
Secondly
, watching sports
on TV
influences a huge mass of people
encouraging them to do more sport
and be healthier. Undoubtedly, Fix the agreement mistake
sports
first
Correct article usage
the first
people
who probably improve their lifestyle, in this
case, this
case will be parents and relatives. However
, despite the advantages of watching sports
on the TV
above, I believe that audience
may face other issues by doing it on a daily basis. One possible detrimental problem is addiction. Correct article usage
the audience
This
is because some people
can not stop watching and will spend long hours in front of the TV
enjoying sports
performances and eliminating their social life and work duties, for example
. Such
irresponsibility may lead to losing a job and unemployment which cause health and mental issues in many cases. Another obvious issue is that it also
might have negative effects on the family and relationships. Spending too much time by being
slumped in front of the Verb problem
apply
TV
does not allow people
to have sufficient connections with their family members, and, therefore
, it creates a non-healthy
atmosphere at home. In conclusion, being addicted or struggling to have healthy relationships in the family farCorrect your spelling
unhealthy
outweigh
any of the possible minor benefits that could come from watching Correct subject-verb agreement
outweighs
sports
on TV
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