Your friend is about to celebrate a landmark birthday and would welcome suggestions as to how it should be celebrated. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter • say what type of party should be held e.g. themed, fancy dress, black tie event • suggest a suitable venue • make recommendations as to entertainment e.g. DJ, jazz band

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Dear Laura, Hope all is well on your side. I would like to extend my early birthday wishes to you, as you are celebrating your 21st next week.

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, I thought of providing some suggestions on how your birthday could be celebrated. Given it is your landmark year, it would be nice to have a theme. Assuming you always liked the frozen movie, an Elsa-themed party would make your day more beautiful.

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, my brother celebrated his birthday

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month at Leela Hall in Kingsbury Hotel, which can accommodate up to fifty guests.

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, they provide event management and catering services as well. I would highly recommend

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venue for your party. Kindly note, they require bookings to be made four days ahead of an event.

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, I would like to suggest a metal band to cover the entertainment part. The band plays amazing music and creates a fun environment too. Looking forward to hearing from you. Thanks & Regards, Dhinushika.M

Submitted by dhinushika_m on Sun Apr 16 2023

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Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

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Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

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Grammatical Range: 9.0

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Task Achievement: 7.0

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milestone birthday
themed party
fancy dress
black-tie event
elegant
sophisticated
atmosphere
venue
rooftop
cozy
trendy
garden venue
DJ
live jazz band
interactive entertainment
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