The graph below shows the amounts of waste produced by three companies over a period of 15 years. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The graph above gives details regarding the production of waste from the 3 most renowned companies (a,
b
,c
) and the changes that took place in its rate from the years
2000-2015.
Organisation A has improved envirirmently as its unwanted products per cent decreased slowly over the past 15 years
from 12 % to 9%. While
,
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B
had a steep elevation in the year 2005.Later, with strict ,amedements
the graph has shown a dramatic fall.
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On the other hand
, institution c
has shown quite opposite results as there is a drastic rise in its waste contribution from 5% to 11% over years
.
In conclusion, though at the start of the decade, the highest contribution of garbage is by A followed by B
and lastly
by C
. But
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years
passed ,ecological degradation is observed in C
while
A and B
showed appraisal.Furthermore
, b
has the least contributionSubmitted by sreya.nimmagadda9 on
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