You have just read an article in an international travel magazine which contained some information about your town that is incorrect. Write a letter to the editor of the magazine. In your letter. -Correct the information in the article -Explain why it is important for the magazine to give correct information -Suggest what the magazine should do about this situation

Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing
this
letter to address some inaccuracies in the recent article about my hometown that was published in your travel magazine.
Firstly
, I would like to point out
mistake
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you did
while
you
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an
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article. You mentioned
wrong
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location of my
hotel
.
Moreover
, the telephone number you
written
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was
also
wrong.
Secondly
, it is important for me to correct the information because most
of
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travellers
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the travellers
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going to
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their destination
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destination
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based on what they read in the travel magazine. To illustrate
this
, you mentioned
wrong
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the wrong
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phone number in an article, and
as a result
, I lose a number of travellers who
coming
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to my
hotel
.
Consequently
, my
hotel
's annual growth will become less.
Lastly
, I would request you to update incorrect information about my
hotel
in your next magazine. I would appreciate your immediate attention regarding
this
matter. I look forward to your reply. Yours faithfully, Milav Soni
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