You have just read an article in an international travel magazine which contained some information about your town that is incorrect. Write a letter to the editor of the magazine. In your letter. -Correct the information in the article -Explain why it is important for the magazine to give correct information -Suggest what the magazine should do about this situation
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing
this
letter to address some inaccuracies in the recent article about my hometown that was published in your travel magazine.
Firstly
, I would like to point out mistake
you did Add an article
a mistake
while
you written
Add the auxiliary verb
wrote
have written
an
article. You mentioned Correct article usage
the
wrong
location of my Change the article
the wrong
hotel
. Moreover
, the telephone number you written
was Add the auxiliary verb
wrote
have written
also
wrong.
Secondly
, it is important for me to correct the information because most of
Change preposition
apply
travellers
going to Add an article
the travellers
Correct pronoun usage
their destination
destination
based on what they read in the travel magazine. To illustrate Fix the agreement mistake
destinations
this
, you mentioned wrong
phone number in an article, and Correct article usage
the wrong
as a result
, I lose a number of travellers who coming
to my Wrong verb form
came
hotel
. Consequently
, my hotel
's annual growth will become less.
Lastly
, I would request you to update incorrect information about my hotel
in your next magazine.
I would appreciate your immediate attention regarding this
matter. I look forward to your reply.
Yours faithfully,
Milav SoniSubmitted by writing7 on
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