Some people believe that there should be fixed punishments for each type of crime.Others, however, argue that the cirumstances of an individual crime, and the motivation for commiting it, should always be taken into account when deciding on the punishment. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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The experts have an opinion that the punishments should be constant for every category of crime.

However

, others reckon that judges should consider the conditions of the person at the time of the misdeed, give the person a second chance to be motivated to live again and decide on the punishments. In

this

essay, I will discuss both opinions about fixed punishments and the circumstances of individual crimes. On the first hand,it is noticeable that there is the viewpoint that judgements for every illegal act should be strongly permanent. In my opinion, the reason, which makes that conclusion, is all citizens are equal before the law.

Moreover

, everyone has to get deserved punishment for his crime by virtue of every community, even the simple citizen and even the highest king, own the same freedom behind the ordinance.

For example

although

, if you steal only 50 dollars, you will answer per each sent stolen by you behind the law. Somebody think that there were only 50 dollars.

However

, even 50 dollars can become the crucial transmitting of your life,

therefore

it is necessary to consider that all we are peers.

On the other hand

initially

, the other public reckon that judges ought to contemplate the circumstance of humans before the crimes.

Then

I believe that the reason for that belief is human factors

such

as protection, accident and compulsion,

therefore

which population are going to do illegal actions. Because there are more categories of situations before the misdemeanour in these ways.

For instance

, some people go to offence

due to

the protection of themselves and the life of close society.

However

, the other category of delinquents misdeed on account of blackmail for the close nation for him.

Moreover

, all culprits have to get punishment for breach, but not for 20 years, maybe for 2-3 years to a decade of mistake life.

To conclude

although

the judges should understand the individual conditions, the criminals must get the judgement deserved by

them

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Include an introduction and conclusion

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The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

Summary
Restatement of thesis
Prediction or recommendation

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To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

In conclusion
To conclude
To summarize
Finally
In a nutshell
In general

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 8.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 8.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

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