Adults do less exercise nowadays. Some think that people can be encouraged to live healthy lives through sporting events such as the Olympics or the World Cup. Others think that there are better ways to encourage adults to exercise. Discuss both views and state your opinion.
In recent times most
adults
do few activities. Some people believe that being encouraged to live healthy lives by
sporting expressions Change preposition
through
such
as the Olympics games and the World Cup. Others believe that there are better ways to encourage adults
to exercise.
To begin
with, there are some reasons which cause this
concern why adults
do less activity. I think many adults
are just wasting their time, scrolling through social media such
as Facebook or Instagram. Some adults
spend time on Instagram. What is more, they always keep their Instagram page updated with lots of photos, as well as
using. Besides
keeping in touch with someone or something like that. Moreover
learning new information from the book , it
slipped their mind. Correct pronoun usage
apply
Also
, these adults
miss out on their productivity and they
lose eyesight and cause brain fatigue and influence their nerve impulses by using a lot of phones. So these Correct pronoun usage
apply
adults
are big fans of a training variety of sports
.
On the other hand
, it depends on their personality. However
, I point out that doing sports
will help to get rid of stress and will help control your lives
. Fix the agreement mistake
life
Consequently
, as I mentioned before with related interests. For example
, chess or checkers. When it comes to they play checkers or chess with close friends or relatives. In my opinion, yes it will help stimulate brain activities, in turn, help to improve their memory. So when they play chess it will help broaden their horizon. Also
being an open minded
person. Add a hyphen
open-minded
Furthermore
, they attend any kind of sports
competition by training these
Change preposition
in these
sports
. And these adults
get rid of quietly
Correct pronoun usage
themselves quietly
from
the social network.
The main conclusion, shortly speaking must be interested in anything. Change preposition
apply
Thus
they achieve goals in the future. Most adults
passed to a healthy lifestyle in my country.Submitted by omondavlat91 on
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