The chart below shows the changes that took place in three different areas of crime in New Port city center from 2003-2012. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below shows the changes that took place in three different areas of crime in New Port city center from 2003-2012.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The given line graph illustrates the changing
rates
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that took place in three different areas of crime in Newport city centre between 2003 and 2012.
Overall
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, it can clearly be seen that the
rates
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in all areas remained relatively stable throughout the given period, with the exception of
burglary
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.
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,
while
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burglary
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had the highest
rates
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at the start, it had been overtaken by car theft over the
years
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. In terms of the most common area of crime at the start, the
number
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of
burglary
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incidents started at just below 3500 in 2003. It
then
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rose slightly and peaked at about 3800 in 2004, before experiencing a massive drop over the next four
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to hit a trough at just above 1000 in 2008. After that, the rate remained relatively stable until the end. Regarding the other two areas of crime with lower
rates
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in the beginning, the
number
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of car thefts stood slightly less than
burglary
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at about 2800 over the first two
years
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. Despite seeing a slight fall to just above 2000, the rate
then
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rose gradually with small fluctuations over the rest of the period to around its original level in 2012,
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surpassing
burglary
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. Meanwhile, the
number
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of robbery incidents began at a comparatively lower
number
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than the other two crimes at about 600 incidents before fluctuating very slightly between 500 and 1000 over the next 9
years
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, ending at about its initial value.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words rates, burglary, years, number with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "give" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "remained" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "stable" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "slightly" was used 4 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • instances of crime
  • significant decline
  • noticeable change
  • fluctuating trend
  • relatively stable
  • minor fluctuations
  • dramatic reduction
  • converged towards
  • crime rate
  • time frame
  • notable trajectory
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