A museum near your home is looking for people to do unpaid work. You would like to do some voluntery work at the museum. write a letter to the museum director to apply for the volunteer work in your letter explain why ou want to do voluntary work at the museum describe some skills and qualities you have that would be useful give details of when you would be available for work

Dear Sir, I am writing
this
letter with
regards
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to the opportunity of working in your museum as a volunteer. I would like to apply for the position as it matches my qualification and skills. I am
also
an ardent history lover and would like to be associated with valuable work in
this
area. I am a graduate
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University
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of Toronto, and my major subject was world history. I have deep knowledge
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Indian history, and during my
course
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I authored a paper on
Indus
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the Indus
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valley
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civilization, that was
well appreciated
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by domain experts. I am
also
a great
story teller
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and can work as a guide to take the public through
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ancient times. I am currently pursuing my post-graduate and will be available for the job on Tuesdays and Thursdays between 11am to 4 pm. I can
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work on the weekends between 10am to 1pm. Looking forward to hearing back from you. Yours faithfully, Apoorva Badola
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