The maps below show an industrial area in the town of Norbiton, and planned future devlopment of the site. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The maps below show an industrial area in the town of Norbiton, and planned future devlopment of the site.

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The maps illustrate industrial development in Narbition
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and
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show the plans for the near future. Based on those planned are include various areas
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as factories, and housing. To start with, Norbition industrial area currently is mainly of factory buildings and the majority is in the east part which is including 5 towers ,and in the north 1 tower, and approximately 2 towers on the west
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, the total
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factory is 8 buildings which are located along the
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the river and opposite with farmland. With regard to, planned future development will
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a huge
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,
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it is can be observed that
factory
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the factory
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industry is replaced by mostly housing for 7 places,
playground
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a playground
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in
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the east
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, and shops and
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medical centre in the south area.
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, in the near future plan will have a school
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the east
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of the residential area. Interestingly, the roads will be developed
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the river to join another residential part.
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, the farmland's scale will be
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on the east
side
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